This is Something

Well I'm writing a story called "This Is Something". And now here's the characters.
The Beginning Of The Story: He was so inasent laying in the hospital bed with his dark brown hair and pale skin. I remember when we played in the field filled with soo many flowers i could barely count and he promised that we would be together forever. Well that was all before he fell into a coma. I used to pick flowers for him. I would bring a different type everyday. The nurses used to tell me I could bring them in the hospital, but I didn't care I would still everyday after school dig up flowers out of my neighbors yard. Put them in little pots and bring them to the hospital. And ohh how I used to read books to him. This one time I kissed him because I thought that he would wake up just like sleeping beauty. I wonder if he ever woke up?

Allana Levi: The protagonist. She's bitter and confused at the beginning but starts to open up when she kisses Danny. Her dad walked out on her and her mother. Her mom is an alcoholic, that tends to cry alot and beat in Allana. Allana is 13 years old and in her first year of middle school. She moves in next to Danny in the summertime and soon becomes his boyfriend. She soon becomes Danny's girlfriend and on the first day of school she moves in with him because of her mother. The girls at her school bully her cause she goes out with Danny. Allana finds out that Danny is the boy that she once knew who was in a coma. She goes through a lot to stay with Danny. But they eventually break up after he cheats on her and gets with a girl names Lea. She forgives him and they get back together. She speaks her mind when she disagrees with something and gets easily embarrassed. She has light brown hair and hazel eyes. She is 5'3. She was unsure if she could trust Danny after she sees him cheat on her. She doesn't try to make any friends because she doesn't want any one to know about her drunkard mother. She often calls Danny a pervert because when she moves in with him because of her mother he accidentally grabbed her chest(she barely has anything there)

Danny Short: He is also a main character. He is very sincere and only wants to repay Allana for when they were little kids. He doesn't remember her at first but soon realizes she was the girl from before. He has loved Allana since he was little. He got into a coma when he was 5 he was only in a coma for 2 months. Before he woke up from the coma Allana moved away and the only thing he had of her was his memories, the flowers she bring him and a little note that says sorry. The note was signed with her name on it but he couldn't read the last name. He is the second oldest out of 3 boys. His older brothers name is Brad. His younger brothers name is Dean. His mother and father are very successful and travel a lot. He only cheats on Allana because of his mother. He is 13 years old. Has dark brown hair and is 5'10.